My depressing poems are written mostly out of emotion rather than through visual or sensory input.

Sometimes when I'm inspired to write love and sad poems, I don't always finish the entire piece.
Usually it's because the right words haven't hit me yet.
Actually, this happened just the other day.
Inspiration struck and I started to jot some of my thoughts down on paper.
Anyway, I wanted to introduce the first part of the sad love poem to you here and see if you could help me finish it.
Here it is.
Fall...
David Bohmiller
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Life in flames
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Night after night I cry
tears of sorrow
tears of pain
pieces of myself falling each day
round and round life spins
each day seems to get harder ...
pray
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you make me smile
being with you makes everything worth while
for you i'll go the extra mile
no one has ever made me feel this way
you make me happy
...
Letting Go...
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Darling don't you know?
That smile on my face is just for show.
I'm letting go like I always told you I would,
I know you want me to stay and I wish ...
Darkness
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filling my heart
engulfing my soul
darkness is me
and i am nothing
i feel no pain
for i no longer exist here
i long to feel the light again
The moment you left
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I look into the mirror and see a sad little girl. Dull lifeless eyes. Pale face. Skin and bones. I use to be the life of the party but now am the depressed ...
lost love
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Why should I stay by your side?
Knowing that I would wake up
With pain in my heart
Every morning I see you down
And sad I tried to help but ...
She..Remebers..
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She remembers it all,
all the people who had said
they cared, but did they really?
She remembers it all,
the sound of laughter and
how happy ...
the damage you've done
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i wish you could see the damage you've done,
the lies and pain you gave me cause my tears to run.The pain inside is cutting me like a thousand pieces ...
*jar of hearts*
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I am here wandering around this empty street alone
and scared trying to find my place in this scary world
carrying this jar of hearts that once belonged ...
*MILES AWAY*
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he hears me cry from miles away they see me cry and they laugh he feels my pain they don’t care he wants me there they want us apart from miles ...
Jealousy
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Her.
Me.
She walks with the it crowd.
I walk with the lame crowd.
She looks right through me.
I can't help staring.
She gets all the guys.
I suffer ...
Blade of pain
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Blade cutting deep,
blade cutting soft,
blood drops, the tears of pain.
running down my arm
I watch as it goes
Slowing swiftly it seems to all ...
Lost One Life!!!
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I had never expected this,
Unknowingly he granted my wish.
I saw a faint light of happiness,
But that too left me in mess.
Why can't I ever be ...
Alone as if meant to be since long ago, since the smiles gone
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Don't ask my tears
blame my heart
don't end it here
and please don't make me start
love was a lie
and the lies are an Art
I want to go far ...
I miss you
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LOL!
I miss you babe ,
I need you by my side.
I want you to encourage me.
But there's many days that go by that i think about you
and then i wish ...
holding your breath for one you care for
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The one you care for
he's in your heart
that when your with him
he fills u up with so much passion
that its pressed against your lungs
but does ...
love of the girl i miss poem
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I awaken once more
my heart on platter a knife protruding from it
I remember her and start to search
I fail to find her my long lost love
the knife ...
The End Poem
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Ended...
im reaching out for you
tryin my best to hide this frown
and im not getting through
hidin behind the tears of a clown
never thought ...
the lines
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the lines between whats good and whats bad
the lines between whats right and whats wrong
left right
forwards backwards
is there a difference it ...
Im Sorry Hurting You Poems
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I had a chance to add to the original piece on the depressing poems page and thought I'd put it in the "Im sorry hurting you poems" category.
This ...
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