Sad Depressing Poems...
My depressing poems are written mostly out of emotion rather than through visual or sensory input.
Sometimes when I'm inspired to write love and sad poems, I don't always finish the entire piece.
Usually it's because the right words haven't hit me yet.
Actually, this happened just the other day.
I was feeling a little bit afraid of losing true love and started to jot some of my thoughts down on paper. (If you're wondering, everything turned out GREAT!)
Anyway, I wanted to introduce the first part of the sad love poem to you here and see if you could help me finish it.
Here it is.
Fall...
Never to reveal again
A heart once pumping full of love
Silence a light that never shone
David Bohmiller, December 2009
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I'm really looking forward to reading what everyone has to say!
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